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    Giúp mình sửa bài writing với ^^

    mình vừa mới có 1 bài viết writing sau nhưng không biết như thế nào nên nhờ mọi người đánh giá với ạ.

    Đề bài:

    Some people think that university should specialize in one subject, while others think universities should encourages students to learn a range of subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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    Whether universities should let students to learn in one subject or not is a center of the heated debate. Some people say that students should learn a range of subject while others people think that university should specialize in one subject. Both of attitudes need to be discuss for students can be choose the best way to learn.

    According to the advocates, university should specialize in one subject because it will be focus in only one subject and students can be easy to learn. Furthermore, they can develop their skills. Instead of learning a lot of subjects, students just concentrate in one and it will be make them to feel more comfortable without stress.

    However, opponents do not think like that, they think universities should encourage students to learn a range of subjects. The first reason why they say that is the students will have more and more skills and knowledge when they learn a range of subjects in universities. Undoubtedly, if students learn with many subjects, they will get more information and it is useful for them in society to find a good job. On the other hand, with learning a range of subjects may be provide for them lots of ways to solve problems they are facing in modern life by the way use things they have learned in universities.

    As far as I concerns, it is my belief that students should learn a range of subjects because the students will have lots of knowledge and skills to use in society. Besides that, they will have many way to choose for them a good way to develop. Although they do not good at in one subject.

    In conclusion, it is not matter the way that students choose to learn, it is important that how they are learning and the aim of subjects they are learning for what. So they should think about their purpose carefully before they choose the way to learn subject.

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    Re: Giúp mình sữa bài writing với ^^

    Bài của bạn nhiều ý tưởng hay ghia á, nhưng mà sai ngữ pháp hơi bị nhiều nha.

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    Re: Giúp mình sữa bài writing với ^^

    Mấy lỗi sai ngữ pháp:

    Whether universities should
    let students to learn in one subject or not is a center of the heated debate. Some people say that students should learn a range of subject while others people think that university should specialize in one subject. Both of attitudes need to be discuss for students can be choose the best way to learn.


    According to the advocates, university should specialize in one subject because it will be focus in only one subject and students can be easy to learn. Furthermore, they can develop their skills. Instead of learning a lot of subjects, students just concentrate in one and it will be make them to feel more comfortable without stress.


    However, opponents do not think like that, they think universities should encourage students to learn a range of subjects. The first reason why they say that is the students will have more and more skills and knowledge when they learn a range of subjects in universities. Undoubtedly, if students learn with many subjects, they will get more information and it is useful for them in society to find a good job. On the other hand, with learning a range of subjects may be provide for them lots of ways to solve problems they are facing in modern life by the way use things they have learned in universities.


    As far as I concerns, it is my belief that students should learn a range of subjects because the students will have lots of knowledge and skills to use in society. Besides that, they will have many ways to choose for them a good way to develop. Although they do not good at in one subject.


    In conclusion, it is not matter the way that students choose to learn, it is important that how they are learning and the aim of subjects they are learning for what. So they should think about their purpose carefully before they choose the way to learn subject.

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